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Re: Today is one of those days - edited
This poem kind of blew me away. It was very descriptive and made me feel like I was there writing the poem. It is cute, and one of those poems ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: Silver Moon
This poem is beautiful. I enjoyed reading it, and I'm sure your girlfriend will love it. There isn't really anything for me to suggest besides you might want to work ...
Jun 18, 2010 -
Re: In His Memory
In His Memory A Mobile Pantoum Remembering his life Recalling all the memories Looking for his keepsakes Never wanting to forget Recalling all the memories Never letting go of him ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: ..
This is simplely wonderful. What a great read and poem! I loved it. (: It was sweet and inspiring. Like several people have said earlier, I applaud the fact you ...
Jun 17, 2010 -
Re: The Christians' Lie
Wow, your poem really made me think about my faith and how I show and represent my faith to others. It also touched emotion. As a person just getting into ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: The Kiss ~ drawing
I like this...a lot! I think the hair of both, the boy and the girl, look good. I am not saying this as a drawer. I wish I could draw, ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: Story, Chapter One.
It was late and very dark. They alley I was walking in was lit by only a street light near the end of the alley which was a few yards ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: New Story Prologue
The semicolon was just a typo. lol. -Morgan
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: That Awkward Moment
You ,once again, have blown my mind. This is a great story and I want more. Sure you made some grammar mistakes, but those can be easily fixed. Its amazing ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: Summer Camp - Chapter 1
Oh my word, dear, I did not realize that you could write like this. (: Sure Written In Blood is good, but this I love. I think this genre or ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: Torture
Amazing. I love this piece, because of the way you wrote it. You added a lot of adjectives, which I may add I like a lot. :D I also loved ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: New Story Prologue
This is a prologue for a story that I'm currently writing. I wasn't sure about the length, so do you think it should be longer,shorter, or if its okay as ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: New Story Prologue
As I sat alone in a dimly lit room, the realization that I would most likely never see the people I love most again crashed over me, and shattered my ...
Mar 27, 2010 -
Re: The Angel Princess: Written in Blood - Prologue
Hey Lee-Anna.Since I couldn't find anything to nitpick on that other people haven't I'm going to skip that part of the review and go straight to the meat of the ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: Elora Chapter 1
Hi,I'm Morgan. I'm not that good at spelling or language so I'm not going to write a lot about anything of that sort.But here is the review. “Come one,” he ...
Dec 19, 2009
